世界微动态丨2023年1月浙江读后续写之蜂鸟和我的奇遇记

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I was invited to a cookout on an old friend’s farm in western Washington. I parked my car outside the farm and walked past a milking house which had apparently not been used in many years. A noise at a window caught my attention, so I entered it. It was a hummingbird (蜂鸟), desperately trying to escape. She was covered in spider-webs (蛛网) and was barely able to move her wings. She ceased her struggle the instant I picked her up.

With the bird in my cupped hand, I looked around to see how she had gotten in. The broken window glass was the likely answer. I stuffed a piece of cloth into the hole and took her outside, closing the door securely behind me.

When I opened my hand, the bird did not fly away; she sat looking at me with her bright eyes. I removed the sticky spider-webs that covered her head and wings. Still, she made no attempt to fly. Perhaps she had been struggling against the window too long and was too tired? Or too thirsty?

As I carried her up the blackberry-lined path toward my car where I kept a water bottle, she began to move. I stopped, and she soon took wing but did not immediately fly away.

Hovering (悬停), she approached within six inches of my face. For a very long moment, this tiny creature looked into my eyes, turning her head from side to side. Then she flew quickly out of sight.

During the cookout, I told my hosts about the hummingbird incident. They promised to fix the window. As I was departing, my friends walked me to my car. I was standing by the car when a hummingbird flew to the center of our group and began hovering. She turned from person to person until she came to me. She again looked directly into my eyes, then let out a squeaking call and was gone. For a moment, all were speechless. Then someone said, “She must have come to say goodbye.”

paragraph 1:A few weeks later, I went to the farm again.

paragraph 2:I was just about to leave when the hummingbird appeared.

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A few weeks later, I went to the farm again. The day was sunny and warm, and I had a sense of anticipation as I walked down the blackberry-lined path. When I reached the milking house, I saw that the broken window had been replaced. I smiled, feeling grateful that my friends had taken care of it. As I turned to leave, I noticed movement out of the corner of my eye. I looked up to see the hummingbird perched on a branch, watching me.

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I was just about to leave when the hummingbird appeared. She flew toward me, hovering in front of my face. This time, I could feel the wind from her wings on my cheek. Once again, she looked into my eyes, and I felt a deep sense of connection. I knew then that this tiny creature had touched my life in a way I could not fully understand. As she flew away, I whispered a silent thank you and got into my car, feeling a sense of peace.

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